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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.
The illustration
display
Correct subject-verb agreement
displays
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 the period of
glass
Use synonyms
 recycling.
Overall
Linking Words
,
it's
Verb problem
it
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 can be seen that the process to recycle one bottle of
glass
Use synonyms
need a
Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
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 six multiple steps. The process
begin
Correct subject-verb agreement
begins
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 when the
glass
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throw
Wrong verb form
is thrown
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 in the recycle bin ,
then
Linking Words
 a truck
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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dedicated
for
Change preposition
to
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 transportation
take
Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
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 all
waste
Correct article usage
the waste
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glass
Use synonyms
 to the treatment plant. The process
complet
Verb problem
is completed
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 by washing and
sterillisting
Correct your spelling
sterilising
 the
glass
Use synonyms
 in the machine .
Moreover
Linking Words
, the
glass
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the
Correct word order
will move to the
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glass
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 will moving for next step
which
Punctuation problem
, which
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 is crushing and melting all the
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glass
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glass's
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 small pieces by putting all pieces of
glass
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 in a dedicated machine.And
then
Linking Words
its
Correct pronoun usage
it's
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 moving on to the moulding machine where all the moulds
filled
Verb problem
are filled
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 with the liquid
glass
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. At finish all the recycled
glass
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go
Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
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 to the markets and
stories
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stores
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 by trucks.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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