The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.

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The graph compares the proportions of various categories of family rubbish
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such
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, such
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as glass, paper,
cans
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, and
plastics
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plastics,
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that were
recyled
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recycled
in a specific city during 1992 and 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen that all types of household waste was reycled most in 2002,
whereas
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1992 was the year that the least amount of waste was
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recycled
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for all
rubbishs
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rubbish
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, except for the
cans
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Firstly
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, the glass was recycled approximately 15% in 1992, and it
was
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apply
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increased in
following
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the following
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years
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.
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, it reached above-30% in 1997, and it reached
the
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its
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peak in 2002, and it became the most recycled rubbish among all categories.
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, the paper
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also has
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also
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an increasing trend in these three
years
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, because the percentage was nearly 15%, which was similar
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the glass in 1992
, after
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. After
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that
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that,
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it
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grew
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substantially in the next three
years
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and reached below-30%
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then
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it reached approximately 35%.
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, the
cans
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and plastic didn't have an increasing trend in all
years
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. The
cans
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flactuated
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fluctuated
during 1992 and 2002, because it began with under-20%, and
then
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it dropped to nearly 10% in 1997. After 1997, it jumped to below-20%.
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, the plastic experienced
more
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a more
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steady trend. It was exactly 10% in 1992, and
then
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it grew slightly and achieved above-10% in 1997 and stayed stable in 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cans, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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