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The graph shows estimated oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

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The given chart shows the difference
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 oil production in some Gulf countries
as
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 Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, and the UAE
in
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 20 years period. Saudi Arabia has shown the highest production of oil

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