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MANY STUDENTS GRADUATE HIGH SCHOOL AND WISH TO CONTINUE THEIR STUDIES OVERSEAS. GIVE THE ADVANTAGES OF STUDYING IN ANOTHER COUNTRY AND GIVE THE ADVANTAGES OF STAYING IN YOUR HOME COUNTRY TO STUDY.

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MANY STUDENTS GRADUATE HIGH SCHOOL AND WISH TO CONTINUE THEIR STUDIES OVERSEAS. GIVE THE
ADVANTAGES
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 OF STUDYING IN ANOTHER
COUNTRY
Use synonyms
 AND GIVE THE
ADVANTAGES
Use synonyms
 OF STAYING IN YOUR HOME
COUNTRY
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 TO STUDY. MANY STUDENTS GRADUATE HIGH SCHOOL AND WISH TO CONTINUE THEIR STUDIES OVERSEAS. GIVE THE
ADVANTAGES
Use synonyms
 OF STUDYING IN ANOTHER
COUNTRY
Use synonyms
 AND GIVE THE
ADVANTAGES
Use synonyms
 OF STAYING IN YOUR HOME
COUNTRY
Use synonyms
 TO STUDY. MANY STUDENTS GRADUATE HIGH SCHOOL AND WISH TO CONTINUE THEIR STUDIES OVERSEAS. GIVE THE
ADVANTAGES
Use synonyms
 OF STUDYING IN ANOTHER
COUNTRY
Use synonyms
 AND GIVE THE
ADVANTAGES
Use synonyms
 OF STAYING IN YOUR HOME
COUNTRY
Use synonyms
 TO STUDY.

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task response
There is no essay to check. You only wrote the question three times. Write an answer with an opening, two main parts, and an end. Give good points for study in another country and for study at home.
coherence cohesion
Use clear parts. In the first main part, talk about study in another country. In the next part, talk about study at home. Use simple links such as First, Also, However, and In the end.
task response
You showed the full question, so the two parts of the task are clear.
coherence cohesion
The topic is easy to see because it is written clearly.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • study abroad
  • higher education
  • cultural exposure
  • broaden one’s horizons
  • develop independence
  • language proficiency
  • international environment
  • specialised courses
  • modern facilities
  • global network
  • career prospects
  • tuition fees
  • living expenses
  • financial burden
  • emotional support
  • homesickness
  • local job market
  • professional connections
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