The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university.

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The chart and the table show the results of the
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users
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at a university.
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, the chart illustrates categories of the
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, and the table shows
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user satisfaction units are measured in percentage. There are five different
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, the first one is the Academic Staff, who constitute 7% wich make them the smallest number of
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, the second is Full-time undergraduate, who constitute 44% makeing them the highest number of the
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, the third is Full-time postgraduate who make up to 25%, forth is Part-time postgraduate who make up to 16%,
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Distance learning who make up to 8%. There are five categories of the
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users
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users'
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satisfaction, the first is the
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opening hours
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% are very satisfied and 35% fairlay satisfied And 0% not satisfied, second is Helpfulness of staff
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% are very satisfied
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5 fairlay satisfied
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0% notsatisfied Third and fourth are the availability of books and journals
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are has 50% and 45% very satisfied
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% and 35% fairly satisfied And 10% and 20% not satisfied
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reliability of wi-fi are 48% very satisfied
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33% fairlay satisfied
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19% not satisfied.

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