The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The given layouts provide information about how an island changed following the construction of several tourist facilities.
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it is clear that
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the island transformed from an undeveloped area in to well-developed tourist attraction. Noticeably, a number of new buildings, transport facilities, and footpaths were added,
whereas
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the
beach
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and most of the trees were preserved. Before the development, the island was undeveloped. There was a
beach
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on the western side. The palm trees were growing in the centre and the north-east. The area was surrounded by a sea on two sides. After the construction, significant changes had taken place. A reception building was built in the centre of the area , and it was connected by a vehicle track to a newly constructed restaurant in the north. From the other side, it was connected by a pier.
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, two groups of accommodations were constructed. Six huts were built to the west of the reception,
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another nine were located to the east.
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, the western
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was converted into a swimming
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for tourists. Despite these improvements, the majority of palm trees remained unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beach with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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