The supplied pie charts illustrate several job patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

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, a striking feature is that craft or similar, general labourers and managerial and professional

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are superior in males,

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other manual, clerical or related and other non-manual

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prevail in females. In terms of males, other non-manual and clerical or related professions are implemented by the same proportion of people in the given year. In terms of female employment, the largest category was clerical or related work, which constituted 31% of all

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was closely followed by managerial and professional occupations (29%),

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accounted for 27%.

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, other non-manual occupations made up 3 times more share in comparison with craft or similar

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, relatively 9% and 3%.

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was the least

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pattern among all categories. Turning to male workers, the greatest proportion was managerial and professional

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, which was 6 times higher (36%) than clerical or related and other non-manual

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(6%). Meanwhile, other manual work represented the second largest category, comprising 26%, which was closely followed by craft or similar

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(24%), but merely 2 % worked as general labourers.

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The supplied pie charts illustrate several job patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?