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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams present information about the composition of library users and their levels of
satisfaction
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 with various services.
Overall
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, full-time undergraduates constitute the largest user group (44%),
while
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 academic
staff
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 are the smallest (7%). In terms of
satisfaction
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, users are most pleased with
staff
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 helpfulness (95% very satisfied) and library opening hours (65% very satisfied),
whereas
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 journal availability and wi-fi reliability receive the lowest approval ratings. Specifically, among user categories, full-time postgraduates account for 25%, followed by part-time postgraduates (16%) and distance learners (8%). The relatively small proportion of academic
staff
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 (7%) contrasts sharply with the dominance of undergraduate students. Regarding
satisfaction
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, the
staff
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's helpfulness stands out as exceptionally well-regarded, with virtually all users (95%) reporting high
satisfaction
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 and none expressing dissatisfaction.
Conversely
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, journal availability elicits the most negative response:
only
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with only
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 45% are very satisfied,
while
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 20% are not satisfied
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 a significantly higher dissatisfaction rate than for any other service.
Similarly
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, wi-fi reliability shows notable discontent (19% not satisfied), despite nearly half (48%) being very satisfied. Book availability receives moderate feedback (50% very satisfied, 10% not satisfied), suggesting room for improvement but less urgency than journals or wi-fi.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words satisfaction, staff with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library users
  • survey results
  • the chart shows
  • the table gives
  • the largest group
  • the smallest group
  • a high number
  • a low number
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • in general
  • overall
  • by contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • positive view
  • negative view
  • service quality
  • study space
  • opening hours
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