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The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005

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The line graph illustrates how much was spent on books in
four
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countries
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 between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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,
expenditure
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 on books increased in all
four
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countries
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 over the
period
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. Germany recorded the highest
expenditure
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 throughout,
whereas
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Austria
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 had the lowest figure for most of the
period
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. The figures for France and Italy
also
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 converged and
then
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 diverged during the
period
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. In 1995, Germany recorded the highest
expenditure
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 on books, at $80
million
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.
In contrast
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,
Austria
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 spent only $30
million
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, the lowest figure among the
four
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countries
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. The figures for France and Italy were both approximately $55
million
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 in 1997, when the two lines intersected. Meanwhile,
expenditure
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 in
Austria
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 increased steadily from 1995 to 1999 before remaining stable until 2001. After 2001, spending in
Austria
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 rose sharply, reaching approximately $60
million
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 and overtaking Italy. France, meanwhile, showed a steady increase throughout the
period
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. Germany remained the highest spender despite some fluctuations,
while
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Austria
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 experienced the most significant growth among the
four
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countries
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Vocabulary: Replace the words four, countries, expenditure, period, austria, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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