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You recently took part in a training course. The organizer of the course has asked you for some feedback. Write a letter to the organizer of the course. In your letter:  Give details of the course you took part in  Say what you found useful on the course  Suggest ways the course could be improved

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Dear
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, I am writing to provide feedback regarding
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the course
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 the necessitY and importance of using AI tools in our century.
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 was an interesting and beneficial event. The most useful aspect of the course was understanding how intelligent software works for applications. It is fascinating how these platforms
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 respond
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 to their customers about any questions
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 the website. Understanding these mechanism we can easily avoid any type of online scam, but
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 us to stay up to date with modern technology.
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, I believe the course could be improved by adjusting the balance between practice and theory. The lecture contains a lot of complex words and information that sometimes is difficult to be absorbed by some of us.
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 more practical
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 would be beneficial for people who are
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 very skilled in the technology field. Thank you for organising
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 a valuable training session. I hope you will pay attention to my suggestions for future courses. Your faithfully

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Give a little more detail about the course, such as when it took place, how long it was, or what you did in class.
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Make your ideas more exact. For example, say which AI tool or task you found most useful.
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Use a more formal opening and ending: “Dear Sir or Madam” and “Yours faithfully”.
coherence and cohesion
Put one main idea in each paragraph. Use one paragraph for useful parts and a new paragraph for ways to improve the course.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with simple words such as “For example”, “Also”, “Because”, and “Therefore”.
coherence and cohesion
Check sentence form and word choice so your meaning is clear. For example, write “the lectures contained”, “automatic replies”, and “more practical lessons”.
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You give all the main parts: what the course was, what was useful, and how it could be better.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear start, main ideas, and a polite ending. Words like “However” help show a change of idea.
Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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