The line graph below shows the average monthly temperature in three major cities

The graph illustrates the mean monthly

temperature

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in Paris,

Dubai

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, and Sydney.

Overall

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, the line graph contains a description of fluctuated

temperature

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in

Celsius

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in three cities over the

year

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. It can clearly be seen that

Dubai

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and Paris showed an upward trend as the months go by.

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, Sydney,

on the other hand

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, declined in

temperature

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during mid-

year

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.

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with,

Dubai

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's

temperature

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stood at 20

Celsius

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,

then

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maintained growth and reached a peak of 36

Celsius

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in August.

Thereafter

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, decreased to almost 20

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Celsius

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at the end

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of the

year

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. Paris comes right after

Dubai

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, starting the

year

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with a low

temperature

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of 5

Celsius

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, increasing to 20

Celsius

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and

remained

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steady for two months, July and August, before returning to its initial

temperature

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.

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, Sydney followed opposite trends and began the

year

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with the highest

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of all

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three cities, at nearly 25

Celsius

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, decreasing to 60

Celsius

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in July, before going back to the same

temperature

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it began with.