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The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart depicts three methods of
waste
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 disposal in a European country over the three years.
In an
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Overall
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overall
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,
landfill
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 was quite popular
method
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 of disposal in 2005. Dumping in
sea
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the sea
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 was
second
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the second
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preferable
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most preferred
method
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 among Europeans,
while
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 burning was
least
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the least
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 preferable methods during the period of time. It can be noticed that in 2005, 9000
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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was
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were
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 disposed
by
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of by
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landfill
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,
whereas
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 1900
million
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tonnes
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 and 900
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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was
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were
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 disposed
by
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of by
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 dumping and burning
respectively
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, respectively
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. In Europe, the use of
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landfill
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the landfill
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method
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was
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apply
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decreased by 500
million
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tonnes
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but
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, but
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dumping
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the dumping
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in
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at
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 sea
methods
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method
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 started to
get
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be
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 preferred by 250
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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 in 2006. Moving
further
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, 1800
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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was
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were
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 disposed
by
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of by
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 the burning
method
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 in 2006. After two years, the burning
method
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was
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had
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 declined by 400
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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. In European
country
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countries
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, the dumping in
sea
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the sea
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 was the most popular
method
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 of
waste
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rather
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disposal rather
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 than burning and
landfill
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, landfill, method, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • trends
  • recycling
  • landfill
  • incineration
  • annual
  • percentages
  • reliance
  • shifts in preferences
  • progress
  • regression
  • future considerations
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management policies
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