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The diagram shows the map of a University Sports Centre in 2007 and at present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show the transformation of a University Sports
Centre
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 in 2007 and at present.
Overall
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, it is visible that the sports
centre
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 has become more modern and a lot of
facilities
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has
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 been added for students. In 2007, the
sport
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centre
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 offered a limited number of
facilities
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. Access to the sports
centre
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 was from the south, with a temporary teaching hut to the right and a football pitch with grass was from north. There were swimming pool, teaching
facilities
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 (20), and a tennis court in the
centre
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 of the map and in front of the football pitch. Up until now, there have been significant shifts in the number of
facilities
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. Starting from the south side of the entrance, where first aid, clinic, lab, and 2 storeyed teaching
facilities
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 were built, resulting in the disappearance of the temporary teaching hut.
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 the football pitch remains in the northern section, it is now surrounded by a running track and has an all-weather surface. The swimming pool has remained in the same location,
although
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 the tennis court has been replaced by a squash court.
While
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 the teaching
facilities
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 increased from 20 to 47.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, facilities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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