The line graph compares the
amount
of appliances sold in an Check wording
number
electronic
store in Ghana between 1965 and 2000.
Replace the word
electronics
Overall
, refrigerators were the Linking Words
best seller
appliances during the given period Replace the word
best-selling
Linking Words
whereas
washing Punctuation problem
, whereas
machines
and Check wording
machine
telephones
rates were growing gradually by the end of the period, despite minor fluctuations.Check wording
telephone
In contrast
, televisions were the least common among other machines.
At first look, the Linking Words
numbers
of refrigerators sold started at 700 in 1965, which slightly decreased after five years, before it significantly rose to about 810 and fluctuted till it reached Check wording
number
it
peak at approximately 1000 in 2000. Correct pronoun usage
its
Although
televisions were the least popular throughout the years, Linking Words
its
figures went up gradually to more than 200.
Fix the agreement mistake
their
According to
the chart, both washing machines and televisions started at nearly 400, despite Linking Words
that
Check wording
the fact that
telephone
overtook in 1965, Check wording
telephones
its figure
experienced a sharp drop until 1985, before Fix the agreement mistake
their figures
it
fluctuated and Fix the agreement mistake
they
end
up at roughly 430.Wrong verb form
ended
Moreover
, washing machine sales increased steadily, even though it encountered some ups and downsLinking Words
,
it reached its highest point at less than 700.Punctuation problem
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