The graph below shows the number of appliances sold in an electronic store in Ghana from 1965 to 2000.

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The line graph compares the
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number
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of appliances sold in an
electronic
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electronics
store in Ghana between 1965 and 2000.
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, refrigerators were the
best seller
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best-selling
appliances during the given period
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whereas
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washing
machines
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machine
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and
telephones
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telephone
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rates were growing gradually by the end of the period, despite minor fluctuations.
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, televisions were the least common among other machines. At first look, the
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of refrigerators sold started at 700 in 1965, which slightly decreased after five years, before it significantly rose to about 810 and fluctuted till it reached
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peak at approximately 1000 in 2000.
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televisions were the least popular throughout the years,
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their
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figures went up gradually to more than 200.
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the chart, both washing machines and televisions started at nearly 400, despite
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the fact that
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telephone
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telephones
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overtook in 1965,
its figure
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their figures
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experienced a sharp drop until 1985, before
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they
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fluctuated and
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up at roughly 430.
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, washing machine sales increased steadily, even though it encountered some ups and downs
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it reached its highest point at less than 700.

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