The diagram below illustrates the production process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The given pictorial diagram illustrates

mechanical

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the mechanical

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and

mannual

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manual

process of sugar production by processing sugar

cannes

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canes

. Looking from an

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perspective, it is evident that the whole process consists of seven stages, that includes harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporation and

centrifuge

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centrifuging

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a core product-sugar syurp is

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manufactured at the final stage of making

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this

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sweet substance.

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, cane plantations are required to grow between 12 and 18 months to ensure the supply. Afterwards, either manpower or a mechanical approach is utilised to collect the mature outcome. More interestingly, the harvest is crushed by using a quite sophisticated piece of equipment to obtain the extraction from the plants. It is worth mentioning that,

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begins the purification procedure, which is completed with the support of a limestone filter. After that, a giant boiler, which provides

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great

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heat,

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turns the juice into a syrup. More positively,

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starts the centrifuge methodology,

whre

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where

the sugar and syrup are separated. Ultimately,

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scientific candy substance is dried and cooled for the end users.