The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

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The maps compare the changes in the city of Petland between 1950 and 2007.
Overall
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, the
area
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that used to be an industrial
area
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became a residential town.
As a result
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, in later year many buildings were established there. In mid 20th century, there was a central crossroad which divided the city into four parts. So, driving along the north road , people could reach the sea,
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to the
west
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west,
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they would face an industrial
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.
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, in the eastern part, was a car park.
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, the south-east section was covered by a grassland. Moving to 2007, the Petland city became lively and modern. First of all, the road in the centre remained unchanged, but it was extended around the coastline.
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, in the north-west of the urban
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, several facilities were established, including a multi-storey car park, a swimming pool and a park on the far corner.
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, the north-east was secured by apartments for tourists near the yacht marina ( sea ).
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, houses and a cinema occupied the south-east and south-west lands respectively.
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, a lot of shops were constructed along the road.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coast
  • beach
  • town
  • harbor
  • road
  • house
  • houses
  • shop
  • shops
  • park
  • field
  • farm
  • water
  • map
  • year
  • grow
  • build
  • built
  • change
  • expand
  • develop
  • replace
  • new
  • old
  • more
  • less
  • along
  • near
  • center
  • edge
  • fishing
  • tourists
  • people
  • area
  • land
  • sea
  • bay
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