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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph illustrates the total yearly income of
households
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 in America during the given time frame, 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the amount of each figure (both the
number
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 of
households
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 and incomes) has remained relatively the same throughout the years.
In addition
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 to
this
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, the majority of the US
households
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 earned 100,000
dollars
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 or more,
whereas
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 75,000-99,000
dollars
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 had the smallest proportion of family income of all 3 years. In detail, in 2007, about 30
million
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households
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initially
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 earned at least 10
million
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dollars
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, holding the highest share of
households
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. By 2015, the
number
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 of people who earned at least 10
million
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dollars
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 had increased to around 35
million
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.
Along with
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this
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,
families
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 who earned less than 25,000
dollars
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 and up to 49,999
dollars
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 increased progressively by 2,000
families
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.
On the other hand
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, 20
million
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households
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 that earned approximately 50,000-75,000
dollars
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 remained the same population throughout the years.
Moreover
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, the
number
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 of 15
million
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families
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 who earned 75,000-90,000
dollars
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 stood at the same record, still leaving the lowest
number
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 of
families
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, dollars, million, families with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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