The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
provided two maps
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two maps provided
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depict how the
school
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has changed from 1985 to now. We can clearly see that
,
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apply
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the
school
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population has increased from 1500 to 2300
students
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.
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, as the number of
students
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increased , the requirement for a large classroom
also
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increased. Keeping that in mind, in the
school
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now , the area for the playing fields is reduced to half, and in that area , classrooms
as well as
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classroom
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a classroom
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block (3 storeys), previously 2 storeys have been built to
accomodate
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accommodate
students
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. A new learning resource center including a computer room, has replaced the library.
Additionally
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, a pool and a fitness centre
has
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have
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been built to encourage
students
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towards
healthy
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a healthy
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lifestyle.
Furthermore
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, the structure of
1985
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the 1985
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school
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had two car park areas, which now
has
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apply
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been reduced to
a
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apply
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one and
small
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a small
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car parking area.
However
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, the entrance
exit
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and exit
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route
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routes
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and the office building remained
same
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the same
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in both maps.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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