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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The graph illustrates household
car
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 ownership in Britain over the period 1990 to 2015.
This
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 report aims to summarise the key trends,significant comparisons and notable changes highlighted in the data.
Overall
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,it is evident that
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Two
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two
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 or more cars experienced a marked increase,the highest value is represented in
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one
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car
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on
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 2005,
while
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Two
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two
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 or more cars
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 the smallest.Another notable trend is the
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one-car
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 and
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Two or more
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two-or-more-car
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 ,which have almost identical percentages
on
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 2030.
Initially
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,
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Two
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two
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 or more
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car
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cars
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 accounted for around 55% on 2005,making it the highest among
all5categories
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all five categories
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folowed
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followed
 by No
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 ,which represents approximately 51% on 1990,significantly
lwer
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lower
 than the largest category.
In contrast
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,
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Two
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two
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 or more
car
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`s contibution is relatively insignificant,with
percentage
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a percentage
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 of only around 9% on 2005.
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,a noticeable trend is the
unifority
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uniformity
 between
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one
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car
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 and
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two
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 or more
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car
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cars
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,which both show
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apply
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similar
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growth
 patterns
on
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in
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 2030
To sum up
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,the data highlights a significant increase in households with
two
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 or more
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car
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cars
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 and a decrease in households with no
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 over the period .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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