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The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

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The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008
The bar chart provides information about the proportions of individuals who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables in a day between three groups.
Overall
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, whilst the three segments exhibited different trends over the given period, they all experienced an upward trajectory followed by a decline.
However
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, the rates of increase and decrease varied significantly between them. As the chart illustrates, women
initially
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 began as the highest people in consuming healthy foods at almost 22%,
then
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 grew steadily to peak 35% by 2006.
Thereafter
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, they declined considerably to 30% within two years. Men are represented as the second consumer of fruit and vegetables, commencing at around 17% and staying stable until 2003, followed by a gradual increase to nearly 27% in 2006. In the upcoming period, the figure stayed unchanged until the end of 2008.
On the other hand
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, children are the least proportions started at roughly 11% and continued with the same level till 2003. In the period from 2003 to 2006, the percentage grew incrementally to approximately 25%, before a slight fall by 2008.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • the proportion of people
  • daily intake of fruit and vegetables
  • five portions a day
  • men, women and children
  • an upward trend
  • a gradual increase
  • a steady rise
  • a sharp rise
  • reach a peak
  • peak at
  • remain the highest
  • record the lowest figure
  • follow a similar pattern
  • level off
  • a slight decline
  • fall marginally
  • fluctuate slightly
  • the gap between the groups
  • respectively
  • over the period
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