The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

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depicts the various stages of making soft cheese, from

water

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and milk to

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product.

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, the

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consists of eight main stages, beginning with mixing the fresh

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and milk and culminating in mixing and heating the finished cheeses. Notably, the movement involves several stages of temperature treatment and thickening the

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finished liquid. The first step in

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process

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is mixing the

water

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and milk together in a box, which is

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transported into a container for

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where it is

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degrees

for 2

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. As it had been added salt before being transported into a fermentation where it is 35

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degrees

for 6

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, where they can be fermented.

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, the mixture is heated to 100 temperature for 8

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to allow evaporation

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to occur

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then

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begins with cooling the mixture after it has been evaporated, which affect to occurr soft cheese between 5 and 6

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.

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the mixture is filtered to remove the

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wastewater

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, the liquid becomes thiker which is

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ready to mix and heat.

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,

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process

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results in the production of soft cheese.