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The first table chart below show changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third table show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhatten, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first table chart below show changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third table show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhatten, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Based on the first
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table
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, it is clearly seen that New
York
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's
population
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 have significantly increased over the past three centuries. From the first graph with the information of all five districts, the human
population
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 from the 1800s to the 1900s increased by around 2.5 million people.
Then
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, from the 20th to
21st
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the 21st
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century
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, New
York
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's
population
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acceleratingly
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acceleratedly
 increased by more than 5.5 million people. In the second
table
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 about Manhattan's
population
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, the results were slightly
in
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contrary to the first
data
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. Though the
population
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 in Manhattan from the 19th to 20th
century
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 increased by a large amount (approximately by 1.7 million), for some reason, from the 20th to 21st
century
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, the
population
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 decreased by around three hundred thousand people.
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 to the detailed
population
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data
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, on the very right of the graph, it shows each
century
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's
population
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 percentage in comparison to all of New
York
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.
According to
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 the
data
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, it can be concluded that it was during
1800s
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the 1800s
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 when the
population
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 of Manhattan covered the most
New
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of New
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York
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 compared to the other two centuries.
Lastly
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, the third
table
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 shows the total
population
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 of
other
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the other
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 five districts of New
York
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 from the 1800s to the 2000s. Unlike the second
table
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, the
population
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 increased more and more each
century
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, and simultaneously, the
population
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 percentage of these districts compared to all of New
York
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 increased by a large quantity as well.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words data, table, york, population, century with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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