The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE GIVEN BAR CHART ILLUSTRATERS THE AMOUNT OF GIRLS PER 100 BOYS TAKE ADMISSION IN MULTIPLE LEVELS OF HIGHER STUDY BETWEEN 1990 and 1998.
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, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT, IN ALL THE LEVELS OF EDUCATION, WAS SEEN IN DEVELOPED
COUNTRIES
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.
ALONG WITH
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THAT, THE RATIO KEEP ON INCREASING WITH EACH PHASE OF STUDY AFTER ANALYISING THE GRAPH, IT IS CLEARLY ABUNDANTLY THAT, IN PRIMARY EDUCATION, IN 1990, DEVELOPING
COUNTRIES
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HAVE 83% ENROLLMENT.
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, IN 1998 IT WILL
INCREASED
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UPTO 4%.
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, IN DEVELOPED REGIONS, GROWTH HAS BEEN RISING AND, ONLY 1% DIFFERENCE WAS SEEN , IN THE YEARS 1990 TO 1998.
ON THE OTHER HAND
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, IN SECONDARY EDUCATION, DEVELOPING REGIONS, SHOWS 72% AND 98%, RESPECTIVELY.
SIMILARLY
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, 82% WAS SEEN IN 1990, AND 99% IN 1998.
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, LEAST ENROLLEMENT WAS SEEN IN TERTIARY STUDY WITH 66% IN DEVELOPING
COUNTRIES
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, BUT HIGH PEAK WAS SEEN IN DEVELOPED
COUNTRIES
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WITH 105% , WHICH ALMOST CROSS THE TARGET SCORE.
IN ADDITION
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, THE LOWEST RECORD WAS SEEN IN 1988, IN. EMERGING NATIONS AND AR

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  • chart
  • number
  • girls
  • boys
  • enrolled
  • education
  • primary
  • secondary
  • higher
  • ratio
  • indicate
  • barriers
  • accessible
  • significant
  • decline
  • pursuing
  • features
  • comparisons
  • gender
  • equality
  • societal
  • norms
  • progress
  • issues
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