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he charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in 3 different years

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he charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodation in 3 different years
The pie chart compares the percentage of holidaymakers
used
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 four different types of adjustments in 1988, 1988 and 2008.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest proportion was staying with family and
friends
Use synonyms
 at 54%,
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however
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apply
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the lowest percentage was
rented
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in rented
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 apartments. As a chart
show
Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
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, the biggest figure indicated was staying with family and
friends
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 at 52%, but the smallest index shown was rented apartments at 7% in 1988. Camping and hotels were 26% and 15%, respectively
in
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, in
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 1988.
Coming to the
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In
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 1998, the highest percentage was staying with family and
friends
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 at 54%, compared to
1988
Punctuation problem
1988,
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 it remained relatively stable
the
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at the
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 highest index. Rented apartment and camping indicated were similar at 11% and 13%. Hotels
indicated accounting
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accounted
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 for 22%. Regarding holiday makers
used
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who used
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 different
type
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types
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 of accommodation, the highest proportion was staying with family and
friends
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 at 44%, but the lowest index shown was camping at 12% in 2008. Rented apartments and hotels were
similar
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similar,
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 indicated at 22%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words friends with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicated" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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