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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B, and C over four different seasons.

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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B, and C over four different seasons.
The bar chart illustrates the
season
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 results of A,
B
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 and
C
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 Teams in the period of four seasons. Generally, the leaders of the
season
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 had a consistent decline in
perfomance
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performance
 in 4 years.
However
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,
winner
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the winner
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 of the
season
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 table still
were the
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was
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team
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b
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B
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.
Moreover
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,the
effectivness
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effectiveness
 and competition between
a
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the A
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 and
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c
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C
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 teams were
with
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apply
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consistent growth and they
divided
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were ranked
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 second between each other in all 4 years.
To begin
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 with,
Team
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b
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 perfomance were decreased by 22
points
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 between the period of 2002 and 2003.
However
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,
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season
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the season
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 was
won still
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still won
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 by
team
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b
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 and the domination continued in
next
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the next
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 years of 2004 and 2005.
Furthermore
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,
team
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 A was on the 3rd place in the first two seasons.
However
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,
team
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a
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A
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 was behind
tam
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team C
c
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 only by 5
points
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 in 2002 and in 2003 collected 11
points
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 and
falled
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fell
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 behind
team
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c
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C
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 by 4
points
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.
Conversly
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Conversely
,
team
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a
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A
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 figures surged in roughly 35
points
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 that made them second and being up by roughly one third over
team
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c
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C
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.
In
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addition
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addition,
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 in
2005
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2005,
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team
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a
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A
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 and
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c has
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C had
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 a steady decline in the results.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words season, b, c, team, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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