The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol iS produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol iS produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol iS produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process we can see shows how
ethanol
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, a biofuel, is made.
Overall
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, their is six main steps to create the
Ethanol
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. It can be divided
in
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into
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two
differents
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different
parts. The first one is the natural and physical transformation
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, and
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the other step is the chemical part. First of all,
Ethanol
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come from trees. Trees and plants grow with the energy provided by sunlight and by
the
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apply
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carbon dioxide. After their
grows
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growth
, plants will be
harve
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harvested
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and
human
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humans
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will keep the seeds coming from the plants.
This
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is called Pre-processing.
As a result
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, the Cellulose extract from the pre-process will create
Ethanol
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with the help of
chemical
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a chemical
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change. The second part will be the processing. The Cellulose that
are coming
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comes
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from seeds is going to be changed into sugars by
chemicals experiences
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chemical processes
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. When Sugars
will be
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are
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created,
human
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humans
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will add Microbes
resulting
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, resulting
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in
Ethanol
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. In consequence, people are going to
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use
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this
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Ethanol
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to fill their cars.
Airplanes
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and cars are going to reject ton of Carbon Dioxide used by the trees to grow.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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