The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made.

The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of making soft cheese.

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, the process has various

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stages starting with mixing water and milk, and ending with the

Initially

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, water and milk are mixed together in

bowl

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a bowl

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. After that, salt is added to the mixture, which is

cooling

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cooled

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to 5

°C

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for 2

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. By

the

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this

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stage, they are fermented

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°C

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for 2

hours

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. Following that,

fermentation

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the fermentation

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mixture

heat

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is heated

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to 100

°C

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to evaporate for 8

hours

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. Steam is produced during

this

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stage. The resulting thick liquid is

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cooled

5

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°C

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for 2

hours

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.

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, it passes through a filter, where

waste water

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wastewater

is removed

and

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, and

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soft cheese is produced.