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The table below shows the rate at which people saved money, expressed as a percentage of GDP, in seven countries from 1990 to 2008.

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The table below shows the rate at which people saved money, expressed as a percentage of GDP, in seven countries from 1990 to 2008.
The table compares the rate at
wich
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 people saved money, expressed as a percentage of GDP, in seven countries from 1990 to 2008.
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 1990,
Singapore
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 had the highest figure
and
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 the United
States
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 had the lowest figure. By 2000,
China
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, India,
Singapore
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 and the United
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states
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 increased,
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 Germany, Italy and South Korea decreased. By 2008,
China
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 had the highest figure
overcoming
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singapore
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 and the United
States
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 remained the lowest.
China
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 and
Singapore
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 grew throughout the period. Between 2000 and 2008,
China
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extremley
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 increased from 37.3 to 53.2 overcoming
Singapore
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.
Singapore
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 increased slightly from 43.6 to 48.3. India
slightly
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grew gradually from 23 to 33.6. The United
States
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 fluctuated throughout the period from 15.3 in 1990 to 12.1 in 2008.
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 germany fluctuated from 25.3 to 26. South Korea and Italy remained to decrease slightly throughout the period.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words singapore, states, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • savings rate
  • comparative analysis
  • economic trends
  • financial crises
  • fiscal policies
  • cultural attitudes
  • investment rates
  • consumption patterns
  • economic growth
  • social safety net
  • notable trends
  • economic events
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