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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented pie chart demonstrates the various types of
library
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users
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,
whereas
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 the table shows satisfactory rates across different categories.
Overall
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, full-time undergraduates and postgraduates accounted for the highest proportion of
library
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users
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,
whereas
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 academic employees and distance learning marked
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the lowest rates.
In contrast
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, the assistance of staff members was the highest in terms of user satisfaction, with approximately 95% of people feeling very satisfied.
To begin
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 with, full-time undergraduates surpassed all other categories in terms of
library
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 usage, accounting for roughly 44%, followed by full-time postgraduates,
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 one-quarter of utilizers. After that, part-time postgraduates constituted around 16%,
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 academic staff and distance learning, both having a share of 15%. In terms of user satisfaction, helpfulness of workers outstripped all other services
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 an outstanding percentage of 95% of individuals feeling very satisfied,
then
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library
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 opening hours, where 65% of
users
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 were extremely satisfied, and around one-third
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 fairly satisfied. The highest percentage of unsatisfied
users
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 was
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 availability of journals, with about one-fifth of
users
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 not satisfied.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library users
  • survey results
  • the chart shows
  • the table gives
  • the largest group
  • the smallest group
  • a high number
  • a low number
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • in general
  • overall
  • by contrast
  • while
  • compared with
  • positive view
  • negative view
  • service quality
  • study space
  • opening hours
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