The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The map shows an industrial

area

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in the

town

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of Norbiton, and the development plan

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the site in the

future

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. At

the

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present,

in

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on

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the northern side of the

town

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, there is the farmland.

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area

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is separated from the rest of the

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by a river. There is a big roundabout located

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the

south west

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southwest

of the

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. There are many factories built around it and along the side of the road. In the

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, the spacious lands of the

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will be filled

up

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with many residents infrastructure. The industrial buildings will be

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with housing projects. In the

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, there will

be

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a housing place in the farmland which is connected with the rest of the

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by a bridge across the river.

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the other side of

river

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the river

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, many infrastructures will be constructed in the

town

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such

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as shops, schools, playground and

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centre near the housing buildings. A new small roundabout will be built

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south of the old one.

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road toward the north west of the

town

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is planned to link

housing

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the housing

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area

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to

others

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other

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places. In summary, the development trend of the

town

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of Norbiton is planned to be a residential

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in the

future

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instead

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of

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an

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industrial

area

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now.