the diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.

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the diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.
The chart below demonstrates the life cycle of
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Monarch butterfly.
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, the development is a cyclical one , a process of evolution, and has five stages which
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with the adults' migration and egg laying, ends with the emergence of
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adult
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and migration.
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with, the process commences with the egg
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, where
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butterflies lay eggs on milkweed plants, a period that lasts for approximately 14 days.
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, the eggs hatch into larvae, entering the larval
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where the caterpillars feed on milkweed leaves and grow over time. Once fully grown, the larva attaches itself to a plant stem in preparation for the next transformation phase. Moving on to the transformation and
adult
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stages, the attached larva enters the pupal
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by forming a protective chrysalis around itself, inside which it remains for 10 days. Afterwards, a fully formed
adult
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butterfly emerges from the chrysalis. In the final
adult
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stage
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, which continues
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about 6 months, the butterfly first migrates south and
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travels back north. Once the migration is complete, the
adult
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butterflies mate and lay new eggs on milkweed, thereby restarting the life cycle.

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