The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh.

The line graph illustrates the changes four separate attractions experienced in Edinburgh

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the

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of vistors came

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from 1980 to 2010.

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, the

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of tourists to Scotland who visited the festival and zoo in Edinburgh witnessed a downward trend

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the opposite was true for the

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who came to other places in Edinburgh in the graph. Looking at the categories that experienced an upward trend in the

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, in 1980, castle and zoo stood by 20

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and 10

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of visitors to Scotland visited to, respectively. In the observed period from 1980 to 2000, the

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of tourists to the zoo fluctuated but remained at the same level after 20 years,

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rose significantly up to 20

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in 2010. Meanwhile, the

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to the castle increased sharply up to about 45

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in 1995,

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witnessed a drop by more than 30

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in 2010. Moving to the remaining categories, in the year of 1980, the

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of tourists to the aquarium reached

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climbed considerably to approximately 35

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in 1985 and later, decreased more than 25

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, standing at about 9

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in 2010. In comparison, there was the smallest change in the

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to the festival in the period, stood by 30

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in 1980 and

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slightly to 26

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in 2010.