The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

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The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007
The map illustrates the changes that Petland went through
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between the years 1950 and 2007.
Overall
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, Petland
had
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become a residential
area
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with all the new houses that have been established.
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, new entertainment facilities have been added to the town. In 1950, it can be clearly seen that Petland had an industrial
area
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in the west, with no other facilities except for the car park in the eastern part of the map.
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the south-east section was covered by grassland, the sea could be reached by driving
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the northern road. Later on, in 2007, the sea was developed into a yacht marina.
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in the north-eastern
seaction
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section
, many shops and apartments have been erected.
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, the south-eastern part had become a purely
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residential
area
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, where only houses have been established. The previously industrial
area
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has turned into a site that has a park, swimming pool, shops and a park alongside a parking
area
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • coast
  • beach
  • town
  • harbor
  • road
  • house
  • houses
  • shop
  • shops
  • park
  • field
  • farm
  • water
  • map
  • year
  • grow
  • build
  • built
  • change
  • expand
  • develop
  • replace
  • new
  • old
  • more
  • less
  • along
  • near
  • center
  • edge
  • fishing
  • tourists
  • people
  • area
  • land
  • sea
  • bay
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