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maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps illustrate the present days,
as well as
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, the future development plan for the norbiton area.
Overall
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, it can be seen clearly that the major transformation was demolishing the factories
in addition
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 to adding facilities to the area. In the future the area will be a convenient accommodation
due to
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 the provided amenities,
such
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 as, the medical centre on the south side ,
as well as
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, the shops,
in addition
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 to the school on the east and a provided playground for children .
Furthermore
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 the roads are to be improved in now days we can see that there is only two roads ,
however
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 , in the future plan multipl roads are added and the farmland on the north can be reached easily.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, in addition".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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