The three given pie charts demonstrate the fluctuation in yearly expenditure in the years 1981, 1991 and
in
2001 in a particular United Kingdom school.
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apply
Overall
, Linking Words
school
spent Add an article
the school
higher
percentage of Add an article
a higher
amount
in teacher's Add an article
the amount
salaries
and Use synonyms
in
other Change preposition
on
worker
wages Check wording
workers'
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while
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, while
,
the smallest proportion of funds Punctuation problem
apply
allocated
for insurance.
In Verb problem
was allocated
details
, 40% money was given to Check wording
detail
teacher's
as their Check wording
teachers
salaries
in Use synonyms
1981
as the figure increased by 10 per cent in 1991. Punctuation problem
1981,
However
, other worker Linking Words
salaries
Use synonyms
was
above Correct subject-verb agreement
were
quarter
in 1991 as the percentage fell 6% in 1981. Add an article
the quarter
In addition
, 15% resources Linking Words
was
kept for the maintenance of furniture and other equipment Correct subject-verb agreement
were
but
there is a decline in 1981 to about 10%. Money Punctuation problem
, but
utilized
in the purchasing of books was 15% Change the spelling
utilised
as
the ratio climbed by 5% in 1981.
As for more, schools spent Punctuation problem
, as
tiny
proportion of their budget Add an article
a tiny
in
insurance in 1981 to around 3%. Change preposition
on
Whereas
, the percentage Linking Words
soar
up marginally in 2001 to around 6%. Tutor's Wrong verb form
soared
salaries
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was
exactly two Correct subject-verb agreement
were
quarter
in 1981,but there Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
is
a slight reduction of about 5% in 2001. Wrong verb form
was
Furthermore
, Linking Words
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salaries
of Add an article
the salaries
guard
and peons Check wording
guards
also
dropped by 7% in 2001 as compared to 1991.Linking Words