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The chart below shows what Anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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The chart below shows what Anthroplogy graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The given pie chart demonstrates the percentage of
gradutes
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graduates
 who are doing different jobs after completing their studies.
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,
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apply
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 the table
provide
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provides
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 information about the salaries of individuals
aftet
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after
 5
year's
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years'
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 work.
Overall
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,
the
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 higher percentage of graduates are working full-time after graduation
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, as
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as the
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while a
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 lower ratio of people are doing
job
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jobs
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 with the post graduate degree. Graduates are earning high
income
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incomes
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 in private companies
in contrast
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 to the Government sector. In detail, the percentage of people who are working
full time
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full-time
 jobs was around to 52%
as
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 the figure of part-time graduates was 15 per cent.
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, the figure of full-time
post graduate
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post-graduate
 and
not known
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unknown
 students was
same
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the same
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 after graduation. As for more, salaries of
Anthropolgy
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Anthropology
 students
was
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were
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 approximately higher in private companies as the income
continue
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continued
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 to grow gradually after five
year's
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years'
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 time.
Furthermore
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, people who are employed in
government
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the government
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 sector income 5%
but
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, but
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 there is a significant increase in
increment
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income
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 after some time. Salaries
in Freelance
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for freelance
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 consultants
was
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were
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 lower as compared to other jobs.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • undergraduate degree
  • anthropology graduates
  • career paths
  • further education
  • full-time employment
  • part-time work
  • self-employment
  • postgraduate studies
  • salary progression
  • salary growth
  • government sector
  • private sector
  • non-profit organizations
  • demand for anthropologists
  • sector-specific skills
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