The diagram below shows the process of recycling paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows the process of recycling paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process of recycling paper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram
depict
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depicts
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the
procces
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process
of
paper
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getting recycled.
Overall
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,
paper
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recyling consist of 9 chronological steps, starting from
paper
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collection till the new
paper
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product
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products
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are produced and are ready to be consumed. At the beginning,
the first step is
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that
paper
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must be collected, whether from recycling
pins
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bins
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, office
paper
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,
news
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newspapers
paper
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or others.
Secondly
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,
pre colllected
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pre-collected
paper
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is transported
specifcallyto
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specifically to
the recycling centre.
Thirdly
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, after arriving,
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paper
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the paper
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is sorted
in to
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into
two sections, namely, keep (
paper
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) or remove (other materials)
,
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;
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moreover
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, the process of sorting is done by a specific employee. After the third step,
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paper
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the paper
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goes through the shredding machine to complete the shredding process.
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, the fifth and sixth stages
,
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apply
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are pulping and de-inking, both
stages
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of which
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take place in a specific
specialized
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specialised
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machine. Followed by the seventh and eighth
precedures
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procedures
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, notably, sheet formation and drying.
Last
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but not
least
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least,
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the new
paper
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products are
procued
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procured
and are ready to go.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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