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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram
ilustrates
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illustrates
 the
process
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 for recycling
plastic
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 bottles, showing the different stages involved in the
process
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.
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, it highlights the step-by-step transformation involved from the initial phase to the final outcome.
Overall
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, the
process
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 consists of nine main stages, beginning with the
plastic
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 bottel is throwed in the trash and ending with
products
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are
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being
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 produced. It is a cyclical
process
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, in which the
plastic
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 bottles
are
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go through several stages before the
plastic
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bottels
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bottles
 are recycled.
At the first
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stage
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 in the
process
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, the
plastic
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bottels
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bottles
 are
throwed
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thrown
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 in
trash
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. After
that
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that,
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 the
plastic
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bottels
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bottles
 are
tranported
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transported
 to the recycling centre to sort the
products
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. In the following
stage
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, the
plastic
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bottels
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bottles
 are compressed into blocks. Once
this
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stage
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 has been completed, the blocks are crushed. The resulting
products
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 are
then
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washing
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 and prepared for the next
stage
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. In the following
stage
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, the crushed
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bottels
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bottles
 are put in the machine to produce
plastic
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 pellets.
Subsequently
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, the pellets are heated to form raw material.
Finally
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, the raw materials are converted into
products
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,
thus
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 completing the
process
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, products, bottels, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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