The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first table given illustrates the

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of New

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City

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all

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five

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boroughs

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every 100 years, starting from 1800. The second chart shows

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Manhattan's

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population

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and its share over the whole

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,

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the third does the same but

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the districts

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of Brooklyn

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, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island. The

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of New

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seems to be rising rapidly

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the

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stood at around 80 thousand in 1800, rising to 3.5

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in

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1800.

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, it reached its peak of 8

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in 2000. For Manhattan, the rise is not as rapid. Starting in 1800, the

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of 60 thousand held approximately 80% of the

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, in 1900, even though the

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increased to around 2

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, Manhattan's share decreased to 54%.

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, the other districts

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have the highest

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growth

. In 1800, only having had a

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of

18,701

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only 18,701

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, it contained 24% of New

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's total. Later, in

1900

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to 1.6

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and held almost half of the

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's

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. A century later, its

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quadrupled: with approximately 6.5

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. That number was the majority of its

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, holding 81% of it. Later, in

1900

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rose

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to 1.6

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half of the

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population.

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, quadrupling, it reached 6.5, being the 81% of New

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.