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The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

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The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The line graph and table illustrate the yearly
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vistors
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visitors
 who visit
Australia
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in
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between 1975 and 2005 from six overseas
reagions
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regions
.
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, the number of
visitors
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 increased dramatically.
This
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 figurs showed over three times more
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vistors
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visitors
 in 2005 compared to 1975. As a contrast,
Japaineese
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Japanese
visitors
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were
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accounted for
largest
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the largest
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 increment
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while
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, while
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 chinese tourisists improvement comparitively lower than other
countires
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countries
. In 1975, records showed 8.8
million
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visitors
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 visited
to
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Australia
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, mostly from
japan
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 with 3.2
million
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visitors
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.
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Furthermore
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 South
Korian
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Korean visitors
vistors
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also
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 records comparitively higher tourists in that
year
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 with 2.9
million
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 individuals. But tourists visited from China, USA and Britain were less than 1
million
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 in that
year
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 with 0.3, 0.4. and 0.9
visitors
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 respectively. From Europe
this
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 number recorded just above with 1.1
million
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vistors
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 in that
year
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.
Next
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Over the next
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 two decades
people
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, the number of people
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 who visited
Australia
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were
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increased significantly.
in
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1985
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1985,
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this
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 was recorded by 16
million
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visitors
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and
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, and
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following
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in the following
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decade
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decade,
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this
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was
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rose
up
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to 23
million
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. In
2005
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2005,
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this
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was
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reached its peak
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visitors
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with 30.4
million
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visitors
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 in that
year
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with
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, with
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 12
million
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Japaneese
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Japanese
 individuals. After that
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Australia
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, Australia
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 was popular
amoung
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among
 South
Korian
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Korean
 (0.9
Million
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) and
Europe
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European
 (4.5
Million
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) tourists.
On the other
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hand
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hand,
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 Chineese tourist were became the least
favorit
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favourite
 destination with
recorded
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a record of
 only 0.8
million
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 people. Even though Britain and USA
vistiors maked
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visitors made
 2.9
million
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 and 1.1
million
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vistiors
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visitors
 in that
year
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vistors, australia, visitors, million, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual visits = visits each year
  • overseas residents = people who live in other countries
  • the number rose = the number went up
  • the figure fell = the number went down
  • increase sharply = go up fast
  • increase steadily = go up in a regular way
  • remain stable = stay the same
  • reach a peak = hit the highest point
  • source country = the country visitors came from
  • account for = make up
  • the largest group = the biggest group
  • the smallest group = the least big group
  • compared with = looked at next to
  • respectively = in the same order
  • overall = in general
  • throughout the period = during all these years
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