The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the

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of how

aluminium

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cans

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get recycled.

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, the

process

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consists of three major

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,

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with

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waste collection, raw material manufacturing, and the moulding

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. As can be seen, the

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begin with a mechanical

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, which starts by collecting used

cans

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from household

aluminium

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cans

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trash bins around the city.

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this

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, the

cans

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are transported by truck to a

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recycling

factory to be processed in the next

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. Cleaning, sorting, shredding, and compressing of the used

cans

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are conducted at

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point.

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, using a particular heating machine, the

aluminium

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cans

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are heated and melted at a high temperature to produce liquid

aluminium

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that can be shaped easily. Once it

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down, rolls of

aluminium

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foil, which

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have a thickness of

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2.5 mm to 6 mm

of thickness

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, are produced. Using the

aluminium

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roll, new recycling

cans

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are ready to use by printing a brand name on them. It is

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worth mentioning that 74% of

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used

cans

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in the UK are recycled, making the

process

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restart once more.