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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two tables illustrate the
number
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 of
students
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 from five different
European
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 countries who were studying in
Australia
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;
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 and the
number
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 of
Australian
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exchange
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students
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 studying in those five countries for the years 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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, the numbers show that in 2007 and 2009, there were more
European
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students
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 who went to
Australia
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 than
Australian
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students
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 who went to Europe. Most
Australian
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students
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 went to
France
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 for an
exchange
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, but the total
number
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 of
students
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 stay same in both years.
While
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 in 2007 most of the
students
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 who exchanged to
Australia
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 were from
France
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;
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 and Germans were the largest group in 2009.
According to
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 the first table, the total
number
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 of
European
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students
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 increased slightly, from 189 people in 2007 to 226 in 2009. Most of the
students
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 came from
France
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 in 2007, and the second highest were from Netherland, there were 61 and 36 of them respectively.
However
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, in 2009, Germans were the main source of the
European
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exchange
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students
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; 62 of them went to
Australia
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, and the second highest were from
France
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. The second table shows that
Australian
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students
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 prefer to study in
France
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 for an
exchange
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,
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 there were 37 people in 2007 and 58 of them in 2009. The total
number
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 of
students
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 who went to Sweden, the UK and the Netherlands decreased, except in Germany, where the
number
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 rose from 18 people to 26 between these two years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, european, australia, australian, exchange, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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