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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.
The table provides insights into the revenues of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas during the period from 1999 to 2004 in five countries.
Overall
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, these countries exhibited different values across the given categories,
while
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 Switzerland maintained the highest level, and Belgium was the lowest.
However
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, the difference among these countries is considered relatively high. As the table illustrates, Switzerland started with the highest share at 15
million
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 in Bananas, before rising to 47
million
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 after five years. Sales in Denmark reached 2
million
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 and declined remarkably to 0.9
million
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 in 2004.
Then
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, Sweden commenced at 1.8
million
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, after which it fell to one
million
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. The United Kingdom and Belgium started at 1
million
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 and 0.6
million
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, before reaching 5.5
million
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 and 4
million
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 by the end of the period, respectively.
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, the sales of coffee in the UK were 20
million
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 in 2004, after being 1.5
million
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.
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, Denmark accounted for 1.8
million
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, and rose slightly to two
million
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 in 2004. The country of Switzerland began with 3
million
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 and reached 6
million
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. Both Belgium and Sweden commenced at 1
million
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 and 0.8 millions and they grew to 1.7
million
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 and 1
million
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, respectively.

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