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The pie charts below show the percentage of students at an adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year Write at least 150 word

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The pie charts below show the percentage of students at an adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year Write at least 150 word
The two pie
chart
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charts
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 compare the
proportion
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 of
studensts
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students
 at
a
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an
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 adult education
center
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 who enrolled in various
courses
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 in 1985 and the present
year
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.
Overall
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, the most significant change
were
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 the introduction of IT
courses
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, which became the most popular subject, and the absence of local history and music appreciation from the current
year
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's chart. Meanwhile, fitness and dance maintained the same
proportion
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,
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 enrolments in modern languages and art declined.
in1985
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In 1985
, modern languages were the most popular subject, accounting for nearly a
quater
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quarter
 of all enrolments, at 24%.
howerver
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However
,
this
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 figure dropped
substaintially
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substantially
 to 17% in the present
year
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.
Similarly
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, the
proportion
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 of students taking art
courses
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 decreased slightly from 17% to 15%. Meanwhile, local history and music appreciation, which accounted for 15% and 8% respectively in 1985, are not represented in the current
year
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's chart.
In contrast
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, the
proportion
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 of students taking fitness and dance remained unchanged at 22% in both years. Cookery
courses
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 experienced a notable increase, rising from 14% in 1985 to 19% in the present
year
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. The most significant development,
however
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, was the introduction of IT
courses
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, which accounted for 27% of student enrolments, making them
became
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the most popular subject in the current
year
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, courses, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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