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The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia.

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The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia.
The line chart displays car expenses in China, Vietnam, Thailand and
Indonesia
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 from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
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, all four countries increased their spending on cars,
while
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 China spent more money on cars than the other countries every year. The other significant feature is that
Indonesia
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 showed more than double its value in 10 years. China was the biggest
spender
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 on cars in 1995 with $80
million
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 and increased consistently to $90
million
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 in 1999, before dropping slightly to $85
million
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 in 2003. It
then
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 went up to $95
million
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 in 2005. Vietnam's expenses began at around $55
million
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 and rose steadily to $75
million
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, making it the second-largest car
spender
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 in 2005. Thailand's spending fluctuated between $50 and $60
million
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 before rising slightly to just over $60
million
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 in 2005.
Indonesia
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 was the lowest
overall
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spender
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 at the start of the period at around $30
million
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, but rose gradually to $40
million
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 in 1999, before surging its expenses and overtaking Thailand in 2003.
Indonesia
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then
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 became the third-highest
spender
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 with just over $70
million
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 in 2005.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, spender, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • spending
  • automotive industry
  • trend
  • comparison
  • data representation
  • fluctuation
  • consumer behavior
  • economic growth
  • market demand
  • investment
  • country-specific
  • graph analysis
  • increase/decrease
  • percentage change
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