The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The table gives information about

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percentage of mobile phone sales in different brands between 2005 and 2006. Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that Nokia witnessed

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largest share over the period,

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the figure for the smallest one was BenQ Mobile. As can be seen, Nokia showed an upward trend from 32.5% to 35% in two years, which was the highest mobile phone sales brand. The

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proportion

of Motorola was bigger than that of Sony Ericsson in the beginning, at 17.7% and 6.7%, respectively. In 2006, both

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Motorola and Sony Ericsson saw an increase

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, the former was 21.1%, which 13.7% higher than that of Sony Ericsson. Moving to the remaining brands, the mobile phone sales of

samsung

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Samsung

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showed a slight decrease from 12.7% to 11.8% throughout a period. The share of L.G.

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experienced a decline trajactory for 0.4% in 2006. The most strike thing

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BenQ Mobile

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dropped

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half

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2.4 in the

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year.