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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart compares data about
mean
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the mean
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 monthly rainfall in two distinct cities. The unit of measure is
inches
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.
Overall
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, the rainfall density in Woodsville is higher than in Blacksboro;
moreover
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, in the
summer
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summer,
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 the number of rains is lower
in contrast
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 to the winter.
According to
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 the diagram, the
biggest
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 quantity of
precipitations
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precipitation
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 in Woodsville were accomplished in November, December and January, from 5 to 6
inches
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;
whereas
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 the lowest figures, which are from 0.75 to 1.5 recorded in June, July and August.
On the other hand
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, in
Blacksboro
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Blacksboro,
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 the peak of rainfall
registered
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is registered
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 only
in
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at
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 the beginning of the year, in January and February, which are from 3 to 4
inches
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. Compared to the first city, in Blacksboro
moisture
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, the moisture
 level remains consistently low from April to November, reaching its most substantial amount
0.01
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of 0.01
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inches
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 in July
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as
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, as
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 well as
Woodsville
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in Woodsville
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.
However
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, in December it reaches its midpoint of 2.5
inches
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which
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, which
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 is equivalent to the same number
March
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as in March
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, after which the downfall started.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words inches with synonyms.
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