Samples Band 9

IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 9

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s. Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

In recent years, the expansion of amount of tourism in luxury conurbations has been increasing rapidly day by day. As a result, the issue has become an obstacle which the local executive authorities feel worried about because of the detrimental impacts on local cultures and environments caused by resorting. However, the hindrance is surmountable if tourists can do some precise solutions.

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People from many countries are marrying later and having fewer children. Give reasons why this is happening. Are there any positive or negative developments regarding this?

There’s an increasing trend of individuals from various countries getting married later and having lesser number of offsprings. This essay will succinctly explain why financial stability and proper home planning are the reasons why these are rampant.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV and reading them on newspaper . What is the reason? Is it good idea to copy famous personalities?

In this contemplate era, it is often seen that common people who are fans of any popular celebrity try to copy them when they watch these prominent personalities on television or read their articles in magazines or newspapers. There is a plethora of these factors that people tend to achieve their lifestyle. But, this is not admirable thing.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge and experience

Having a balance diet, exercising, and avoiding stressful situations are widely accepted as essential keys to maintain a healthy lifestyle. For those living in a tropical country as Brazil, enjoying the warm weather and typical cuisine of the region have paramount importance to their well-being.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Each year, more and more people from all over the world leave their native countries and migrate to another one. Some choose to immigrate to better their lives while others are forced to escape the turmoil at home. This activity results in positive consequences in the former case and unfortunately lead to negative in the later as outlined in this essay.

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In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem.

The number of visitors who have a visit to art galleries is decreasing in a number of countries. The cause is the fact that people find arts meaningless. However, this problem can be solved by educating citizens about the arts, and reducing the ticket prices of galleries.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Regardless of the breakthroughs in food production globally, many do not have what to eat. In this essay, I will be reviewing the causes and also propose solutions to nip these issues in the bud.

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