Samples Band 9

IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 9

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some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. what are the reasons for this behaviour? what actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Life has changed over the years. The biggest problem is not worrying about being able to eat something anymore, but the biggest desire of people nowadays is to buy expensive gadgets even if they cannot afford them. This unwise action might lead to debt. Some of the reasons are connecting to the idea of showing the status in the society. By introducing stricter rules, related to the loans, might be a solution.

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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possibl. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinio.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that schooling acts as a torchbearer for the youngsters. However, it is argued by many individuals that schooling of young children must be initiated from the very beginning, while others opine that it should not begin before 7 years of life. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and argue why I think the former point is better.

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Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities.What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In the contemporary world, the migrant of youth from the countryside to cities is rising. It is opined by many individuals that it is a positive development while others argue that it has a plethora of downsides. In this essay, I will explain about what are the causes of this shift and why I feel it is a beneficial trend.

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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

The number of people adhering to healthy food and regular physical activities is rising. The main reasons for that are advances in science and awareness about the benefits of an active lifestyle. Among possible approaches aiming to make other people do the same is school programs telling about the importance of sport and good food.

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The number of people are at risk at serious health problem is only because of overweight. what is the reason and how it can be solved?

It has been claimed that obesity puts individuals at risk of acquiring so many serious illnesses. This essay will examine the reason for this trend and a solution will be provided.

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So,Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicle for travelling purpose. What are the reasons of this increasing trend? Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this.

The demands for private means of transportation for travelling is rapidly growing among modern people. Initially, this essay will suggest that the biggest causes of the phenomenon are poor public transit and comfort zone of living standard and then argue that changes in the environment and financial burden are the most detrimental ramifications.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlegde or experience.

Mall numbers have been increasing over the past years and, they have been offering more and more interesting activities each day to the public. However, some people believe that shopping offers a lot of negatives effects while others think that malls provide amazing experiences to customers. I strongly believe that shopping has a hugely positive impact on human evolution.

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The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the implementation of demonetisation, payment methods became a hot topic of discussion. While some side towards credit cards, many people still prefer to stay with cash citing the reason that credit is still a newer concept in the long history of finance. This essay elaborates on why I feel that credit cards are a preferred payment method as compared to physical currency.

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Culture around the world has become more similar to the other countries then it was before. State reasons, example and conclude if it is a positive or negative trend?

Civilization across the globe has become more common to other nations as compared to the past. In my opinion, this is a positive trend for the following reasons.

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Many working people get little or no exercise during the work day, and have health problems as a result. -Why do so many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? -Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The issue of the health of most jobholders is in danger because they do not have the routine sports activities has grown in importance over the past few decades. There are several reasons that led to this issue and various measures that how this problem can be solved immediately.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because consumers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, minute rural stores have closed down due to the fact that buyers commute to larger shops or malls to buys goods. I think it is a negative development because the smaller stores will not be given the opportunity to grow and expand.

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Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the modern-day world becomes increasingly advanced and more developed, poverty might seem like a problem of the past. But, the numbers of people living below the poverty line are on the rise. In this essay,I will discuss the causes of this issue, as well as propose possible ways we can help the poor.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of kids physical fitness is moving towards the disease called obese, very rapidly which consequently causing numerous health issues across the affluent nations. Having said that, we will discuss the various factors responsible for the above-mentioned statement and impact of it.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is common worldwide that young adults leave their parents' house and start their own life when their studies are finished. Many of those youngsters choose to live on their own or live with a friend. I believe this choice has numerous positive sides and this essay will pinpoint some of them.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many individuals think that there is no benefit of having babies at the early span of the marriage. However, some couples don't follow the same plan after marriage. In further discussion, I will shed light on the advantage of having kids after a few or more years of marriage.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of young people are inclined to marry after graduating from university or after becoming prosperous. Young adults do not have an intention in becoming parents, as they want to travel around the world and chasing after desire. I reckon this is an absolutely positive trend.

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Citizens in metropolises encounter a lot of issues every day. The biggest problems are traffic jam, irritating adults and air contamination. Reducing the number of municipalities' residents is an optimal approach the administration should implement.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of people assume human-activities are destroying the ecosystem of the world. As a result, global temperature is growing continuously. In this essay, I will examine the main cause of this phenomenon, and suggest a viable solution to this issue.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of citizens are using their own vehicles every day. This trend is followed by some drawbacks; one of these is terrible traffic jam irritating people and starting to stroll in the city is a practical solution in reducing the number of automobiles.

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In some societies, more and more people are choosing to live on their own? What are the reasons people choose to do this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

With the advancements in technology and also because of globalisation an increasing number of people are becoming self-sufficient. In my perspective,this is definitely a pragmatic trend and should be supported. However, there are various reasons behind it, which are illustrated in the further essay.

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