Samples Band 9

IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 9

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Write about the following topic. There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Immigration is nowadays becoming a noticeable issue for many countries as many people wish to live overseas. Thus, it is suggested that they should be permitted to move independently from nations to nations whether they desire. From my perspective, I utterly disagree with that suggestion because I believe its disadvantages weigh more than its advantages.

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`Nowadays, a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet. Is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the modern era, The huge amount of sources regarding health issues are posted by people on many websites. It is believed by some that It has positive impacts on users life, while others have contradicted view. I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides before a reasonable conclusion can drown.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Global tourism is a blessing for many countries while it is a curse for some specific fields such as the indigenous people and the climate.Despite having few demerits the merits overweigh overwhelmingly due to the consequent expansion of trade and commerce.This essay will describe both sides of worldwide tourism with an example from my life.

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Many companies use advertisement to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or bad thing to the society?

Several companies rely most of their business on the advertisement to increase sales. There are a number of reasons to make propaganda effective. However, it is not always made for the common good. Society has felt many times the positive and the negative effect of advertising.

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More and more people want to own items by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or positive impact?

It is trendy to buy luxury goods these days. Being affected by consumerism, Many people think that items by famous brands could make their life much happier. However, it can have a negative influence on society.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To describe a fit individual, healthy food, proper physical training and stress-free living are the constraints generally used in many countries. I believe, in the place where I come from, similar to others, to maintain proper health, people opt for a nutritious diet and regular workouts, maintaining the ideal weight and stress levels.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

There are many individuals below the poverty line in all the countries of the world, each of them handling it in various methods. The substantial increase in the population is one major reason for this. However, by providing the necessary education and basic financial support from the government, would help them fight their battles.

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More people have unhealthy diet and do not do enough exercises. What are reasons for this? How can we encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

Physical activities and diet are the most vital parts of sound health. Recently, It has been noticed that a significant majority of people lack in those areas and are more inclined towards eating junk food and living a sedentary lifestyle. There are several factors responsible for such harmful practice and also certain measures could be taken to cope with them.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People in different countries have their own preferences for buying or renting a place for living, depending on their convenience. While rental dwellings have there own merits and demerits, I believe that purchasing a house is better than rental ones. I shall further explain it in the following essay.

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In several parts of the world, there is currently a lack of students choosing to study science in universities and colleges. What are the reasons? And what will be the effects on society?

There is no doubt that science is considered as one of the difficult subjects by many experts. Presently, the number of graduates from this field is being declined. Although the high course fee and hardness of this make the course is least prefered by college-going students, implementing new tactics would assist to overturn the scenario.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Since the last few decades, the severe well-being problems are escalating in the certain demographics of a society. It is, therefore, the obesity has become a major concern in the people of all age groups. This essay will discuss the root causes of the condition, including sedentary lifestyle and poor diet along with that some preventive measures will also be mentioned to mitigate the effects.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity. How could it be tackled.

Since the last few decades, the severe health problems are escalating in the certain demographics of a society. It is, therefore, the obesity has become a major concern in the people of all age groups. This essay will discuss the root causes of the condition, including sedentary lifestyle and poor diet along with tha,t some preventive measures will also be mentioned to mitigate the effects.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this topic. Write about the following topic In many countries, paying for the things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasing common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer Write atleast 250 words.

Recently, people across the geographies are becoming more and more comfortable with a phenomenon of making payments for their purchases using the application installed on their cellphone. Many are sceptical about this trend, but, according to me, benefits such as customer convenience and cashback offers outweighs the security issue, which is the only disadvantage that can be tackled easily. The essay will discuss these points in greater detail, and support it with relevant examples.

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People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It can be easily recognized that communicating through the internet is becoming more and more engaging to people, in comparison with face-to-face interaction. There are several factors that account for this trend, which leads to my belief that this change is for the better.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

The stock market has been extremely competitive nowadays. People choose to do shopping in large malls instead of the small stores located on the street as they would like to pursue a higher living standard. As a consequence, an abundance of small local stores is closed down. As a whole, this is a positive development for national revenue. This essay will discuss the benefits that this development brings.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, it is usual that people go to large shopping centres or malls to shop their products. Unfortunately, the consequence of this new behaviour leads to the closure of many local businesses. Like many things in life, there are positive and negative aspects related to this topic. Although there are many beneficial points in this development, the negative aspects are relatively sad and the answer is just unfulfilling.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

In recent years, the youth are attracted more towards fast foods and have a lesser interest in nutritious food. As a result, parents are facing problems with an increase in the weight of their offspring. In this essay, we will discuss the problems related to obesity and the possible solutions which we can implement to be rid of the concern.

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Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution?

It is incontrovertible that recent years have seen an immense amount of deteriorating conditions of environs -- which has been mainly caused by human activities, and there are many remedies that authorities can make it possible to ameliorate habitat health. Notwithstanding, this disquisition will delve the causes behind this unforeseen occurrence, and subsequently will put forward the panacea to arresting this menace.

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Some people believe that technology has made men more sociable, and others think that it has made us less sociable.Discuss both views?

Many people think that the development of technology made individuals, especially men, are more outgoing, whilst others say that it encourages people to be less outgoing. This essay will discuss both perspectives.

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Some of the people believe that video games are useful for children while others say these games have harmful effects. Discuss both views

Some people say that virtual games are worthwhile for kids, whilst others say that they can cause negative effects. This essay will discuss both views.

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